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Kitty

'Great Time War'? Reminds me of Doctor Who.

8 年前回覆

ShadowBobcat10

I haven't actually watched Dr. Who, but the "Great Time War" has something to do with people murdering others left and right to gain immortality. I'll probably talk more about it later, too.

8 年前回覆

aefadawsd

Awesome! I loved how you used a Time Catcher to talk about the different types of time killers. And I really like Ms. Rose. She seems like a wonderful killer.

8 年前回覆

ShadowBobcat10

Thank you. There's going to be plenty more of Ms. Rose next chapter (this story's a multi-parter).

8 年前回覆

aefadawsd

@ShadowBobcat10, Yeah, I kinda figured that one out with the title. Belladonna is an excellent name for a killer, really good one.

8 年前回覆

ShadowBobcat10

@Lata, Thank you! Ms. Belladonna is coming up. The characters are based on the main characters of RT's RWBY. Ms. Rose is Ruby and Weiss, while Ms. Belladonna is going to be Blake and Yang.

8 年前回覆

You had some good world building in this chapter. There were a few mistakes, and some sentences were odd, but it's nothing an edit can't fix. I really want to know more about this world. It reminds me of the movie, "Out of Time."

8 年前回覆

ShadowBobcat10

Thank you for telling me about the odd sentences. I'd love it if you could show me with a "suggest edits." Feedback is the thing an author needs most :D

8 年前回覆

@ShadowBobcat10, Sure! When I'm on my computer next time, I'll suggest the edits =)

8 年前回覆

ShadowBobcat10

@Akaluv, :D

8 年前回覆

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