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部屋いる sponsored 300coins for Issue 2!
看到貼文才想起來書看到一半還沒寫書評，先插個眼避免忘記
2 weeks agoReply
隱
先謝謝妳的打賞(๑•̀ㅁ•́๑)✧
但其實不用這麼客氣啦，
書評的慢慢來就好～
2 weeks agoReply
Lalaline
一開場感覺就有大事發生ಠ_ಠ
1 month agoReply
隱
沒錯~這是一切事件的開端~
1 month agoReply
Silas Voxel
楔子的節奏很快，指揮中心的緊張感有寫出來！同為寫科幻的來串個門，推一個，大大加油～
1 month agoReply
隱
謝謝～希望這個楔子可以讓大家有往下讀的動力( ´∀｀)


不過我的故事嚴格來說主要是奇幻、科技算是一種輔助（？）

一起加油讓彼此的兒女繼續成長吧(๑•̀ㅁ•́๑)✧
1 month agoReply
夜沐
不虧是 yabai 市，一大早就這麼 yabai ......
2 months agoReply
隱
啊哈哈我都沒發現居然有這個諧音在耶
算不算是種燈下黑(゜∀。)
2 months agoReply
大秦書說人
直接震成肉靡呢
這匕首賣嗎？
3 months agoReply
隱
喂？110嗎？

有人要買凶器！！！（ ﾟ∀ﾟ ）
3 months agoReply
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