I really like your writing. Your fine style and the dark ambience drew me in completely, and the premise is very interesting. I would really like to read more! By the way, how do you imagine the demon? Is she / he in human form? Has young or elderly looks?
Thank you so much! I do have a few more chapters that I will be posting here when I get around to it lol. As for how I imagine the demon, he is genderfluid and spends most of his time in a male body (thus typically referred to as he/him). He's not really in human form, though he looks human, but demons have superior senses and demon eyes (which will be mentioned later on); the main character, however, does not have these eyes (which is explained later). He looks to be in his mid- to upper twenties.