I haz teh cavities, thanks. I WAS BRUSHING REAL GOOD UNTIL NOW, TOO!!!!!!!!!!! And even flossing...WHY DO CHEESY STORIES GIVE SO MANY CAVITIES?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!
oh gosh this was so adorable and sweet, and so many other things! I loved the way you kind of showed how different he felt with her, and in Venice as well. "She was my new home" was really, super duper adorable (I sound like a little kid, but my mind just won't go around anymore lol) All in all, I really liked it!
I grinned for many reasons at this. It's cute, short and simple. I love how at the end, you wrote how he felt about her; that she was his new home. Another reason I grinned at that was because those exact words are also in my story Our Magic Home. Glad to know someone has the same cheesiness level as me. Awesome job!
Loved it, beautiful, good job!
Cavities.
Eros sounds really romantic and Italian, so this came out.
yeah, it does. Might be Greek.