This chapter flow was immaculate! And i love the introductions of time and then progression of the scene from that said time of day that is an amazing way to transition and the build up of Plot with normal slice of life events ending with a perfect cliff hanging end that intros a creature native to the world was a great choice! I could tell you really enjoyed detailing this chapter and its even stronger than the first! 🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬
And i love the introductions of time and then progression of the scene from that said time of day that is an amazing way to transition and the build up of Plot with normal slice of life events ending with a perfect cliff hanging end that intros a creature native to the world was a great choice! I could tell you really enjoyed detailing this chapter and its even stronger than the first! 🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬