Thank you very much! I'm presently taking a break from this work to focus on editing Daddy's money, which was my initial concept because I lost my self and motivation on it it's only a half-written. This kinda arrived later, and it was too much for me to handle all at once.
Okay! I do appreciate any suggestions. Just so you know, chapter 6 was completely deleted, so you don't have to read it unless you want to, but I didn't like it so that chapter and what it contained so it no longer has anything to do with the book.@Bubblegumgabber,