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I like the dynamic you wrote between the three generations of woman. Each understandable in their own way, it couldn't have been able to grow up in the shadow of a mother who was perfect in every way, she probably has very high expectations causing her to treat Najara this way.

As for Najara, well she is looking for a fair knight, perhaps she might meet one we read about in the previous chapter XD
3 years agoReply
Arcane-Hermit
Def one of the harder perspectives to write, so I'm happy that struggle was conveyed!



And yeah, let's see, WHO might be vying for Najaras affection hehehehe >:)




3 years agoReply
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