A few grammar mistakes:
1.."In fact Jacobs" If this is the first name of a student then just get rid of the "s". If its his last name then keep the "s"
2."To watch......The football" Either change this to "watch.....football" or to "watch.......The football game"
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A few grammar mistakes:
1.."In fact Jacobs" If this is the first name of a student then just get rid of the "s". If its his last name then keep the "s"
2."To watch......The football" Either change this to "watch.....football" or to "watch.......The football game"