nah man she's just plain creepy from beginning to end. I have trust issues with little girls who smile too much 😣

Yeah, that's def true 😅😅.  The cat would've tried to rip the girl's eyes out for sure. Also, cats are just mean jerks. They're cute but they're satan-spawns. Always so scary and grumpy -_-

Also, I'm not the best at gore, I'm surprised that I managed to even write that much of it.  

@Esfandiar C. Hale, Im pretty good at gore. From all the stuff ive seen on the internet I know how parts of a person rip, how different parts of the body getting crushed sounds . And I know a lot about injury details and shit like that. I do not sleep well I tell you h'what. 

@Bengolong, I ain't surprised..... 

@Esfandiar C. Hale, Here's a tip if you're ever writing and you want someone to get shot. Bullet holes irl are much smaller than depicted in movies. The hole itself is only the size of the bullet. And it also bleeds slower than you would expect. It dribbles rather than pours. Also if someone is shot in the face. The part that was shot usually indents because their facial structure gets destroyed. I saw a video of this guy who was on his back. And the guy recording was sat on top of him. Pinning him down while aiming a machine gun at his face. After some back and forth he shot him in the face twice. Once in the cheek. Once in the bridge of the nose. Both areas where he was shot dented inwards. 

@Bengolong, Hmm, I see. Thank you for this advice! I need to copy-paste this. 

@Esfandiar C. Hale, Feel free to come to me if you want help on how to add detail to any first aid or injury moments in your writing. 

@Bengolong, okay thank you so much!! 

thx! :) 

@Esfandiar C. Hale,np :)