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harkonnaz
Very interesting. I like your writing style ;)
James Villinger
Not sure what part is supposed to be nsfw, but interesting concept so far. I would like a reference to him being a dog/wolf creature earlier than you did, because other than the cover image, for the first several paragraphs, one could assume he was a pig/boar, or something different.
DiscordedDoctor
I mostly put it there as a disclaimer- innuendo and such...Thank you for bringing that to my attention, I'll try and get it fixed as soon as possible :)
funkyconquistadora
Smart dialogue! I enjoyed reading it.
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