Still really liking the idea of reincarnation. It's not touched on, from what I've read at least, so it's nice to see it written about. I saw a few spots where there were a few articles missing. The only thing I would recommend is the abruptness that I felt with the flow of information. Maybe it's just me though. I didn't quite understand Kasha's introduction. ON TO CHAPTER TWO.
Haha it's all really draft-y right now, isn't it? I definitely will make corrections later when I've finished with it. Maybe it'll be smoother and less..spiky then, I guess.