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虛冲
評分：B
10 months agoReply
北斗八星
謝謝大大評分
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不勝丸
評分：B

評語：喜歡你描述的這種淡淡的、有點曖昧的情調，讚👍
10 months agoReply
北斗八星
謝謝大大評語
10 months agoReply
存在
評分：B
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北斗八星
謝謝大大評分
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：B
評語：情境的描述、人物的動作都輕易得見，與春的連結可再加強些，例如雨絲落於花間，滿地墜紅等等，或許會更好。
10 months agoReply
北斗八星
謝謝大大評語
10 months agoReply
凝雨
評分：B

有點暖的愛情故事，文筆尚算流暢不俗，唯春天氣息略嫌遜色，比較可惜。
10 months agoReply
北斗八星
謝謝大大評語
10 months agoReply
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