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子不語
史卡特的確是墮落妥協線，跑了至少兩三年。故事開場時大概是他在妥協線的底點。

這邊我會在修改開頭的時候多加點著墨。（例如強化他對阿速卡的不耐煩態度 XD

關於風格，我開頭的風格跟現在好像有點差異，我自己看都會有點陌生感。 XD
不知道這算好事還是壞事。
5 months agoReply
菜根
如果菜根跟你說，從好笑變成不好笑0.0 你覺得呢O.o
5 months agoReply
子不語
@菜根, 好問題⋯⋯不過下半部的基調就比較嚴肅，所以還能接受。 😅
5 months agoReply
菜根
@子不語, 之前是有寫嚴肅故事混合搞笑對話喔，但這個不見了。2026讀者魔後續會在創挑一一標註出來，你再瞧瞧。(當然，等我今天趕完稿再看) 其實書狂，就是看到這個才生出來的0_0 風格偵測與風格賦予。 看你~菜根只是看到有些地方可以套用之前的風格，卻沒有加上去，因此覺得──嗯！？這樣~弄得出來就可以讓讀者邊笑邊哭0.0
但是，劇情的設定集都在小說家手上，有可能小說家有什麼伏筆之類的會透過那樣展現，而搞笑的對話會沖淡那些印象，總之~讀者魔依然會善盡它2026的功能~

南無~
5 months agoReply
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