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晴空下的雨
迸裂>>雖然能明白這裡的意境，不過"碎裂"、"墜散"之類的可能好一些? 

"迸裂"比較有種偏突然的感覺，可是前面已經有著"伴隨落下"，接起來會有點衝突感。
2 weeks agoReply
凶讀
好就碎裂
2 weeks agoReply
福多多
當晚，他在旅館收到神秘人轉發給他的字條。他跟著上面的提示，去到一處幽秘的集會現場，而那裡正進行著一場古老的儀式⋯⋯
2 weeks agoReply
晴空下的雨
馬上歪成其他畫風了XDDD
2 weeks agoReply
凶讀
......
2 weeks agoReply
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