Hmmm. Interesting.... Well, that story was quite interesting. I didn't really feel the suspence, but then again it's hard to make do that. Most recent one was reading Kubera about a month ago.

 Really?! You put two cliff hangers on the same chapter and one of them involved one of my OTPs. Also, thank you very much for leaving Asha. I thought you were cool at first, but then you became this huge bitch. Look what you did to poor Leez! 

You kept secrets, you fired snappy insults insults at the girl and she still stayed with you, because your the only this left that can be called... home. You tried to kill her! She's so fricking innocent and already had enough sadness in her life. Thank god, for Yuta and Mister( actual nice people).

:-0