I love this chapter! Wow. So Abe and Andromeda were lovers! And oh Fay...I wonder what the connection is between these three people. Could she be a descendant of Andromeda? And whoa Fay spoke in ancient tongue... that further strengthened my view about the connection she has with these ancient people - though I don't know what yet. Hmm...I don't know about that possibility (of Fay being a descendant) nor do I know how to feel about it. Anyways, I musn't get carried away haha. I really like the sentences when Fay said there's something fascinating about a song healing wounds - it really does sound entrancing. 

I also like the little history about Mel, the Siren and about her Queen and the Atlantis' incident with her cousin. So Mel has a soul mate? Love it! Maybe he'd make some cameo in a chapter and meet her just because he misses Mel aha. I found myself feeling pretty relieved that Ben and Mel are not an item (I'm torn now about Ben and Abe omg xD) 

And I do like the information about two goddesses reaching out to Mel and Ben to give out help. 

I'm intrigued with each chapter I've read. Keep up the excellent work! :)