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歲紫歲紫
首先，謝謝比冥的閱讀！感謝你那麼認真的看完《大夢芳華》這個故事，而且還給出這樣詳細的評價，作為作者的我真的很很很很很高興☺️！！！很多謝你的讚賞，關於這個故事我真的花了很多心血，不管是在故事背景、情節或是在人物設定中。中途也想過不寫了，不論如何，能令你覺得好看，真是最好的讚賞😆
關於你提的那些缺點，其實我也意識到的。有些地方的確是多一點描寫可以讓大家更融入環境；多一點心理描寫讓大家更容易與角色感同身受。不過我經常寫著寫著，只顧著趕劇情就忘了停下來，寫仔細點。
最後，放一個小劇透，之後劇情會迎來大轉變，秋向晴和夏至鳴的關係也會有所改變。希望你可以，和秋向晴以及夏至鳴一同好好享受接下來的旅程。有點長氣，再說一遍，謝謝～
7 hours agoReply
比冥
感謝您的回覆，第一次看到這種雙穿類型的小說，蠻新奇的，《大夢芳華》這部作品之後會繼續看，不過可能會先屯個幾章，也歡迎來看我的作品呀！
7 hours agoReply
歲紫歲紫
@比冥,好的～已留書籤了！題外話：封面很美！
6 hours agoReply
比冥
@歲紫歲紫,我的編輯也說封面很帥！
6 hours agoReply
歲紫歲紫
@比冥,真的很帥👍🏻
6 hours agoReply
比冥
@歲紫歲紫,謝謝！
6 hours agoReply
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