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W.H.
感謝參與～

挺有趣的作品，這算是童話詩 or 童謠 (後者音樂性更強，複沓結構也更多～)；最後的翻轉有意思，不過我有個疑問：小蛤蟆待的池塘是不是很大？馬媽媽一踢，剛好把小蛤蟆從離家有點遠的池塘 A 點，踢到池塘 B 點，回到小蛤蟆的家。

🐎💢┌┛┌┛┌┛★(ﾉ´*ω*`) 🐸ﾉ

新年快樂❤️
4 months agoReply
傑深
新年快樂，祝創挑主測驗順利!
4 months agoReply
W.H.
@傑深,謝謝傑深！！
4 months agoReply
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