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萬年老木桌
這僅代表我個人的看法：
天人機甲的設定非常有趣，看得出來天人科技之先進對於主角的勢力或時代來說，高了不止一層
但是一次性釋放太多情報，反而會削弱神秘感跟魅力
1 week agoReply
CF LAM
明白，這是因為：
1. 設定上，還有更多未知的東西，真相其實不只是現階段的這樣，以後的篇章會慢慢揭露。

2. 作為新手，也會害怕節奏太慢（本身已經是），會流失讀者。
1 week agoReply
萬年老木桌
@CF LAM,了解！不過還是盡可能把情報融入在劇情表現中揭露會更好～
1 week agoReply
CF LAM
@萬年老木桌,感謝支持
1 week agoReply
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