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Tolerh
@CENPOR
6 months agoReply
CENPOR
谢谢大大的书评(⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)
我第一篇章确实有点古代风（也许之后做个番外补充设定），但是我后面的篇章努力拉回来符合的世界观了。
6 months agoReply
Tolerh
@CENPOR,原來如此～看來只需要些微的修稿即可。加油囉！(⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)
6 months agoReply
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