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黑耀神
感謝DUCE大大評價！

用千層麵的層次來形容，的確適合本書！
部分讀者也反映某些章節名詞方面，提高了閱讀門檻，我之後會適當做一些優化。

故事前期採用多線叙事，目前有已展開三條敘事線：王權線、征伐線、冒險線
伊馮娜、那法爾兩人作為主角貫穿本傳，他們會在故事中成長，系列計劃會至少有五卷，敬請期待哦థ౪థ
1 year agoReply
DUCE
千層麵很好吃喔，看過動漫把人做成千層麵的，搭配肉醬應該確實可以蓋過去……（？
總之就期待前輩的作品了！
1 year agoReply
黑耀神
@DUCE,再說就兒童不宜了！ＱＱ
1 year agoReply
凜冬
DD的書評速度真快，冬某敬佩不已～
1 year agoReply
DUCE
感受到了嗎，這就是閃電SPEED！
1 year agoReply
凜冬
@DUCE,突如其來的中二是怎麼回事🤣
1 year agoReply
DUCE
@凜冬,主要是黑耀神前輩的之前看過，所以馬上評
1 year agoReply
黑耀神
@DUCE,多謝賞臉！歡迎下次光臨థ౪థ
1 year agoReply
DUCE
@黑耀神
1 year agoReply
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