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猴子李
對話用詞好艱深啊… 作者功力很強啊 



我都還要反覆琢磨才看懂…（好啦…也許是我國文太差了😂）
2 weeks agoReply
朝花夕拾
哈哈，這邊寫他們對話針鋒相對，的確是要反覆琢磨一下～😆
2 weeks agoReply
執一
看得出來大大很認真斟字酌句，古雅之餘又反映了人物的心景，真的很讚！ @朝花夕拾
5 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
謝謝執一！為了寫他們對話，當時也是很燒腦啊哈哈。不過很值得，好幾位讀者反而很喜歡這種隱隱約約的針鋒相對對話呢！
5 months agoReply
TING
有趣有趣，整場言語上的交流表面看起來和諧融合，但實際上只是忍讓著彼此，因為子峘的關係，看到趙叔光要忍耐心中的不滿，不禁感到有點舒爽XDDDDD
8 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
哈哈，真的，形勢比人強XD
8 months agoReply
世水
各大勢力與子峘對話談吐中，禮儀細節都是相當講究～ 這次子峘邀眾人與之比試，感覺還頗有壓力的😓 勝也不是，敗也不是……😮‍💨
8 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
猶記得設計這篇對話時，很燒腦啊。
8 months agoReply
世水
@朝花夕拾,看得出編輯對話上的用心🥹 字字斟酌呀👍！順帶一說，當時看草原兄弟們與子峘的對話，我很替他們感到擔憂、害怕XD
深怕一個出錯，便人頭落地……
8 months agoReply
魯嚕嚕
強力的對手出現了！這位智瑤不僅容貌上跟趙脩各擅勝場，謀略反應看來也不在趙脩之下，難纏了！😥
9 months agoReply
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