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莫三
那段吃東西的描述真棒，然後我消耗了所有的能量在這章了謝謝
1 year agoReply
癲客道人
自評：我覺得還可以的是我沒有因為受害者的性別就用sexualize的筆法寫
（我覺得這就是很多獵奇向作品常為了強調太多東西，而犯的首要錯誤）

莫三辛苦啦，早點休息，下一篇有更噁心的東西
1 year agoReply
莫三
@癲客道人,已經看完了，真是想吐，你寫獵奇也是很厲害
1 year agoReply
無明孤舟
乾，我看了三小🤯🤯🤯

這段虐殺實屬變態，逼人吃腸子還給我用了味覺描述，謝謝癲癲老師，我還要繼續看下去(???
1 year agoReply
癲客道人
凶手到底是誰呢？真相只有一個！（BGM響起）
吃腸子果然還是要先洗過、煮過😶‍🌫️
1 year agoReply
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