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笑具
感謝評論! 莉莉那一大段其實是為了呈現她一直說不停才不分段的，看來沒有傳達到😅。

感謝建議! 回去修改一下!
3 years agoReply
Endlessly（椋梧）
這個我知道，因為撒旦那邊的敘述就看得出來了，只是有點雜亂。
如果是這樣不用更改也沒有關係，或是斟酌使用刪節號。（僅供參考）

不客氣，謝謝笑具大大參與！
3 years agoReply
笑具
@Endlessly , 明白!👍
3 years agoReply
Endlessly（椋梧）
@笑具,:D
3 years agoReply
Endlessly（椋梧）
@笑具
3 years agoReply
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