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寒狼
個人很喜歡這篇，用字遣詞在美感之餘又帶出畫面，雖然是別離，卻又帶出如風起浪花班豁達又不捨的、五味雜陳的感觸，一首詩對「你」送行，卻也是對「自己」的送行，頗具意義(也可能是我腦補太多)。
3 years agoReply
寒狼
呀，剛剛發現有個奇怪的白底，編輯清不掉後刪掉重寫，結果居然整串都刪除了
3 years agoReply
魚肉(飲鴆)
我原本還以為白底是故意的 XD

沒關係，我還記得一些。
這個題目對我滿有難度，因為我不太挽留別人，若是已經成為要追憶的程度，就是放棄挽留……接受彼此的道路再不互通，無論生者或逝去之人。

總之感謝點評，能帶給你如此感受是我的榮幸。

還有因此而多補了一篇，嘗試多點挽留的感覺 😬
3 years agoReply
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