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虛冲
評分：C
10 months agoReply
存在
評分：C

評語：？
10 months agoReply
戀嬿紅唇
評分：Ｃ

評語：

看不懂你到底想呈現的意象是什麼，

文章前後不連貫。
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：C
評語：開頭製造了懸疑，會想知道花山怎麼了，但中間的轉折，例如為什麼會去湊熱鬧？這感覺不合理，後續發生的事情就會出戲，且與花的連結變得有點牽強，可能再思考一下會更好。
10 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評C,抱歉覺得你離題了。
10 months agoReply
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