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休牛夕仁
雙調五十八字，上下片各三平韻，韻尾押陽開韻。非常工整。
5 years agoReply
霧飄山亭
感謝你的喜歡！是的！臨江仙上下片字數句構相同，十分工整！（只是自己較習慣寫蘇軾的54字體，這次玩個新的XD）自己滿喜歡oeng韻，覺得寫出來滿悲傷的XD
5 years agoReply
休牛夕仁
@霧飄山亭,這有一個東坡粉
5 years agoReply
霧飄山亭
@休牛夕仁,沒有啦XD重點是蘇軾體的臨江仙末句是五五字相對，較易寫XD
相對來說，自己是較喜歡李煜、李清照等婉約詞！
5 years agoReply
休牛夕仁
@霧飄山亭,蘇軾早年和晚年詞作，你較喜歡哪個？
5 years agoReply
霧飄山亭
@休牛夕仁,其實個人覺得蘇軾的詞風真的十分多、變化很大，有豪放、婉約、曠放…個人偏食婉約詞XD所以並無去分早晚年，基本上只要是偏婉約的便喜歡！蘇軾來說最喜歡是《宴桃源·綠槐高柳咽新蟬》、《蝶戀花·花褪殘紅青杏小》
5 years agoReply
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