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介鶴吉
我不太懂為什麼是要用挖腦袋
太顯著的明示通常會降低觀看後的後勁感
建議可以多有些隱藏訊息，讓讀者推敲整個故事
5 years agoReply
檸檬伯爵
好~謝謝評論 我修改一下

5 years agoReply
癇派 ⍢⃝و
不能去喇會變殭屍然後掰www
建議可以再將對話字句修改簡潔些，並可試著不靠表情符號營造氛圍！感謝參與！
5 years agoReply
檸檬伯爵
好><我修改一下
5 years agoReply
癇派 ⍢⃝و
@檸檬伯爵, 謝謝你！變成了殭屍售票員的概念滿不錯的齁齁 ( ´∀｀)
5 years agoReply
檸檬伯爵
@癇҉派҉, 嘿嘿 再修改了2句完成><比之前好些嗎(? 
5 years agoReply
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