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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
我看過四回後，有以下的期望：

其實我還摸不清楚作者的流向，也許是故事的細節有很多迷一樣的設定，令人有很多問號。但同時間故事又似乎走得太快，未有時間去了解當中的問題，來去匆匆。

或是應該在之後的部份會更多揭曉的部份。
7 years agoReply
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
有需要可給讀者看第三回的內容：

https://www.penana.com/story/37188/暑期八回連載小說大挑戰-第三回/issue/15
7 years agoReply
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