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車理小龜
因為這是無限流，主角的能力是"美食的俘虜"中的用食物變強的戰士，所以食物味道是很重要的(只是目前第一卷的篇幅無法寫出，這真的很尷尬)而且因為這時我只想好主線，主角的性格都未定形，所以就比較少寫情感....等他拿到了女主之後會好一點的
4 months agoReply
晨星．死神
噢,原來！那抱歉了，你的描寫是真的很詳細沒錯。
因為平常沒什麼在看無限流，對這方面沒那麼熟悉😅
第一次接觸🙏🙏
4 months agoReply
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