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@陽壽木魚  沒有評得很高難度喔。目前完成了新的章節，有問題可以提問~
5 months agoReply
陽壽木魚
啊啊，謝謝菜根點評，我學測考完啦～現在可以開始修稿了
然後女主果然是靠現在的劇情完全猜不到⋯接下來也會多提一點角色動機的部分 雖然羅雷爾在這章變成這個樣子有一大部分都是圖榭害的⋯
5 months agoReply
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@陽壽木魚,不明顯呢~他改變的太快了說XD 原本，他應該是個懦弱的傢伙，口頭禪是對不起......所以他對於男主應該是又愛又恨的感覺。(BL啊！)
5 months agoReply
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