/comment.php?chapter=18&id=200001
Comments - 《荊棘王冠1》風起的前奏 | Penana
arrow_back
Comments - 《荊棘王冠1》風起的前奏
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
exposure_plus_1
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to leave a comment.
邊緣坐標
开篇花费了极大的篇幅去复述从神农氏到新中国的历史，是巨大的阅读门槛，风险感觉很高。

文字说教和情绪化的宣泄的比重很高，情绪高点非常密集，emm，吾辈也不知道怎么说这种有些奇怪的感觉。


选的题材角度是偏哲学讽刺的，角度很好，切入点很犀利，加油。
5 months agoReply
明二
感谢
5 months agoReply
Back to Story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.