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嵐斕
@天宮守
1 year agoReply
天宮守
感謝書評！

其實我大概也猜到主角和女主給人的印象有點不穩定，因為男主角基本上沒有原型，而女主角的原型完全不怕生，所以之後要修的時候會注意下這個地方。

至於冗詞贅句其實我有注意到，不過這可能要完本後再修。

最後是男凝的部份，這個給我帶來全新的觀點。雖然真要說的話，這種小說大多都是男性向，但如果也能照顧女性讀者的話，相信會更上一層樓！所以，我之後修文的時候也會着重改善這些地方！

再次感謝嵐斕子大大的書評！
1 year agoReply
嵐斕
@天宮守,如果能幫到你就太好了，加油！
1 year agoReply
天宮守
@嵐斕,當然幫到我啦，大家一起加油吧！
1 year agoReply
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