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阿賴耶 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 18!
感謝阿殞大大的書評OwO//
ABO設定確實很…難以描述XD 因此真的很感謝大大願意閱讀這篇，並且提供了超棒的回饋～
5 months agoReply
阿隕
應該說我試閱的部分比較少，對於整個故事不太了解，所以我就看著你給我的故事大綱去寫評論。
我是覺得BL的部分寫得不錯，不過我比較少讀這類型的，所以比較難給予更多回饋。
5 months agoReply
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