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藍橋春雪
話說，青梅竹馬的部分比較有特色，其實是因為沒有篇幅留給她，所以我故意幫她加一些衝擊性的特色，讓她跟篇幅比較多的會長可以達到平衡
2 years agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
感謝補充。
2 years agoReply
VIA
如果就「男主角因什麼原因放棄競技」，隨著故事進展漸漸取回熱情。

我覺得《蒼之彼方的四重奏》是教科書級數的作品w
2 years agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
沒錯，所以我就用那個作為參考，寫了一部以這種展開為主軸的企劃XD

——然後暫且放置。
2 years agoReply
VIA
@夜臨, 真巧w 我也有用蒼彼做參考的東東w

進度在3萬字左右w
2 years agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
@VIA,英雄所見略同！
2 years agoReply
藍橋春雪
話說，如果我告訴夜臨現在故事大概在2/3的位置，那麼爽快感你覺得會太後面嗎XD
2 years agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
最慢要在三分之一，可以的話最好在更前面一點就安排男主角活躍的橋段。
2 years agoReply
藍橋春雪
@夜臨,這麽做節奏或許會好一點，但對我來說有點不夠扭曲跟痛苦XD
2 years agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
@藍橋春雪,我的想法僅供參考w
2 years agoReply
藍橋春雪
@夜臨,謝啦，之後寫完再麻煩你幫忙看XD
2 years agoReply
藍橋春雪
狗派好多，我絕對是雪乃股
2 years agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
原作中我也是，但這裡決定支持狗派。
2 years agoReply
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