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鎖夢籠
七龍珠是一部我覺得蠻神奇的作品，現在梳理下來戰力設定一塌糊塗，伏筆也很糟糕，但大家就看得很爽（（
2 years agoReply
子不語
七龍珠剛開始是搞笑漫，到了比克登場就變成格鬥漫，然後就不可思議地大紅。我覺得主要原因是畫技。鳥山明大師真的用乾淨利落的線條彰顯了格鬥漫的動作感，超強。
2 years agoReply
海貍 sponsored 600coins for Issue 18!
祝子不語新年快樂！！
今年有機會看到連載小說嗎（誤
2 years agoReply
子不語
喔喔喔！感謝！

連載小說有先放第一章在方格子上，當作是實踐給亡友的陳年約定。之後的章節會在全部寫完之後日更上Penana：

https://vocus.cc/article/65ac9ed1fd897800019824fe
2 years agoReply
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