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凌清
匡噹。鮮紅酒水瞬間迸發濺散，若嬌豔花朵一夕盛放。花蕾飽滿濕潤散發刺鼻烈香，花瓣不羈四面擴延像要吞噬地面。清冷月華若水無聲傾灑，湧入。深綠碎裂玻璃片安靜棲躺地面，像不起眼的葉。柔光熠映，閃爍。

綠葉襯紅花。(*´▽`*) 但沒有緊湊感，反而冗長，就......嗚嗚，獻醜獻醜 (´∩ω∩｀)
4 years agoReply
七玖
果然很凌清呢！就是美美的叙述，像画画一样。不过也是没有摔碎的紧张感了，倒像是在描绘美丽一样。
4 years agoReply
凌清
@彤畫,很凌清？這是甚麼形容詞啊......。XD
4 years agoReply
七玖
@凌清,就是凌清会写出来的样子XD
4 years agoReply
凌清
@彤畫,(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
4 years agoReply
凝雨
嗚啊呀呀呀！！！！！
居然為了我那一句而寫了一篇文章，
我好感動！超開心呢！❤️
謝謝你！🥰
4 years agoReply
七玖
哈哈，不谢呢，因为我觉得写的不错啊，就萌起了这篇的念头。你也提供了我素材啊，我也要感谢你呢😄
4 years agoReply
凝雨
@彤畫,🥰🥰🥰
4 years agoReply
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