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大秦書說人
若誠心而論，這是個好故事
現在應該是……放學時間？
咳咳在下因為大俠前面的寒暄所以胡扯兩句

閣下的故事走向挺吸引人的，內容也常常出乎意料，架構也算清晰，多次穿越這點很戲劇化
嗯，在下指點一二的部分是
閣下的一句話其實可以分段寫，一段直接塞在一起很雜，而且沒辦法描繪出表情的變化

希望能稍稍幫助閣下一些
4 months agoReply
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