/comment.php?chapter=17&id=202657
Comments - 三分熟詩集 | Penana
arrow_back
Comments - 三分熟詩集
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 0
exposure_plus_1
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to leave a comment.
W.H.
我發現七分熟寫詩，很喜歡使用複沓句式 (至少最近我讀到的都是～)，這種結構，情感和思考可以漸次加強、加深，也有詠歎的感覺，很不錯👍！！
4 months agoReply
七分熟
這是我個人喜好的寫詩方式，不過有些首沒那麼追求層次，純屬情緒宣洩和亂來(〃ω〃) 請不要介意
4 months agoReply
W.H.
@七分熟,不會介意呀～寫作本來就是以自己的方式，說自己想說的話；詩，更是如此。

有個宣洩的方式滿好的，這也是文學的功能之一。
4 months agoReply
Back to Story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.