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原子能
光耀的反應很棒，明明感覺到星夢不對勁，但沒有直接衝突，而是選擇冷靜觀察和記錄，甚至還提醒了奏真他們，這角色外冷內熱的感覺塑造得很好
8 months agoReply
原子能

【又會是樣的局面呢】漏字=>又會是"怎"樣的局面呢
【但你能 證，他能安全控制那股力量嗎】漏字=>但你能"保"證

8 months agoReply
深淵
感謝指正
8 months agoReply
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