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原子能
這個點子很棒，但如果能再多一點懸疑氣氛的鋪陳會更好。比如主角可以先觀察久一點，發現更多假人活動的細節，讓恐怖感慢慢累積，而不是直接正面撞上
7 months agoReply
可能撞名的作家
感謝評論，我會好好留意
7 months agoReply
原子能

【擺"作"各種動作】建議=>擺"做" 或 擺"成"
7 months agoReply
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