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AnFr安鍅
評語：嗯嗯～為什麼會讓安鍅想起：「我噠噠的馬蹄聲，是個美麗的錯誤」呢？

不過給讀者情感很豐富喔！

前面開頭的詩序真的是絕絕子！冒昧的問一下，是小鹿自己寫的嗎？（抱歉，冒犯了！）

第一次在這一個系列創挑中看到有關戰爭的題材！加分！
1 year agoReply
璐沐
這首是小鹿寫的喔，不過小鹿有參考啦(⁠.⁠ ⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠)
（感覺戰爭題材很適合拿來用:D
（有加分耶~~~謝謝
1 year agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@璐沐,原來如此~小鹿好棒!
1 year agoReply
璐沐
@AnFr安鍅,謝謝誇獎~~~
1 year agoReply
AnFr安鍅
欸～好熟悉！
1 year agoReply
璐沐
一句話可以千奇百怪，一個劇情當然也行了XD
1 year agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@璐沐,當然XDD
1 year agoReply
璐沐
《「一個劇情」也可以千奇百怪》
（可以試看看XD
1 year agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@璐沐,在不累死自己的前提下，可以考慮
1 year agoReply
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