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聽風旅人
說個感想，場景的跳脫太快了，而且場景的描寫有點不夠深入，希望作者細部描寫一下場景，還有，玫瑰不是有刺嗎………這樣直接捏爛，齊姐的手沒問題嗎Σ(ﾟДﾟ)？
9 years agoReply
洛芽
場景的部分我會再加強的(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ
齊安弦還是有增強能力的
所以玫瑰的小刺不會痛喔
9 years agoReply
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