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天也
我改成了

新娘眼中泛著無助，一絲瀅光，又有誰想過夢想能讓自己痛苦不堪。

因為自己把寫文章當成興趣，所以多以表達自己的特色為主，對於語意的合理性沒多大的深入。（但，能改的地方我盡力去改。）
6 years agoReply
朱諾(Juno)
  我有去查含蓄的意思，其實一種解讀是裡邊含有，不過含蓄應該不常跟眼睛搭配，眼中含蓄可能不太是我們會用的詞彙配搭。就這邊來說是一句普通的描述，並沒有刻意想要製造陌生化的感覺。所以可能要問作者，這個寫法是否有在其他人作品、描述裡出現過，我看是覺得有一點違和。
6 years agoReply
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