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逆風狂楚

這裏忽視了彩色鳥兒與白色鳥兒兩者的分別。
整體來說，如果能令我們能夠代入鳥兒的角色去想的話會更好。
不過整體來說也是不錯的。
誠意邀請你參與下一階段的挑戰！
8 years agoReply
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