/comment.php?chapter=16&id=22267
Comments - 畸戀 | Penana
arrow_back
Comments - 畸戀
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 0
exposure_plus_1
coins
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to leave a comment.
‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎
閱畢，劇情鬧爆。


有點像八點檔ＲＲＲＲＲ


(◓ω◔)技術高燒，這個我自己念感覺很６。
8 years agoReply
至冬 朝
劇情鬧爆？那啥？還有技術高燒又是那招...
8 years agoReply
彧行
八點檔+1wwwwww
前面的劇情張力稍有不足，還有人物的對話希望寫之前可以試念一次，有些文字不適合出現在口語之中。
8 years agoReply
‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎
@彧行,(◓ω◔)技術高燒。
8 years agoReply
彧行
@ ‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎,什麼是高燒XDD
喔還有，錯別字要記得檢查，「~」這個符號少用。
8 years agoReply
Back to Story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.