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楠都月
准備 -＞準備 
一座天台 -＞天台上 

這幾集打鬼怪都挺不錯的。
只是個小意見，就是打鬥過程如果更清晰描述或加上令人深刻的畫面可能更好（？
1 week agoReply
嘿嘿阿嘿嘿
好，會試著練習這個部分，感謝提醒
1 week agoReply
AnDY
很有小時候抓鬼電影的氛圍
2 weeks agoReply
不知餘
聊齋誌異中有寫，人死為鬼，鬼死為聻（音同艦）。我的認知是「化為烏有」的意思。若往後有需要只用一個字去形容鬼死掉的感覺的話，大大可以考慮使用。
2 weeks agoReply
嘿嘿阿嘿嘿
這個我知道，但這邊的設定上鬼死是重入輪迴喔（設定上鬼是由陰氣匯聚才能待在陽間，鬼死就是陰氣被打散了所以只剩一個正常的魂魄），所以用不到這個設定，不過也感謝評論
2 weeks agoReply
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