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漫予 sponsored 2000coins for Issue 16!
一起加油，祝福小魚各方面都好💗
2 months agoReply
小魚一尾
謝謝你，也祝你平安順遂～
2 months agoReply
漫予
非常感謝小魚的詳細分析與建議，真的很開心也很感動我的第一次（閱讀心得）能獻給小魚💗

小魚的感受非常精準，非常喜歡你的閱讀心得🫶

的確我的小說最大的致命傷一直都是節奏太慢，會非常挑戰讀者的耐心，感謝點出問題🥹

我可以分享這篇感想嗎～？
2 months agoReply
小魚一尾
可以的，也謝謝你的參加～希望這篇感想能讓更多人知道與喜歡這篇小說～
2 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@漫予
2 months agoReply
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