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星野維
動作場面是真的蠻難寫的
5 months agoReply
CF LAM
是啊，又要合理，又要有創意，現在回看，都有丁點主角威能了，有點違反自己設定。不過應該遠未到甚麼龍傲天，王霸之氣之類的程度，算是擦邊球吧！不然弄出一個外星蜘蛛，以普通槍械武器的小隊滲入，還不知如何對付。。。

當然，撤退然後換重武裝就會容易，但小說張力就會沒有了。
5 months agoReply
景曦
@CF LAM,這次戰鬥挺有看頭，期待後來的動作場面
1 month agoReply
CF LAM
@景曦, 要到第二話中段才打了
1 month agoReply
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