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夏澄 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 16!
6 months agoReply
夏澄
哇嗚！默默太幸運了，被二位同時點名🤭

感謝大神建議，大家都說泉王子一下子人物全部出來很緊湊，看起來真是個大問題呢😅，本來是想讓節奏快一點，所以最後選擇讓所有人全部一起現身，這部分默默再思考怎麼修正。

再次感謝願意給默默修文的建議唷（比心🫰
受益良多❤️
6 months agoReply
休
感謝打賞~~
6 months agoReply
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